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TennisNinja
07-31-2010, 07:13 PM
I put this together in Paint, of all things lol. We get a choice of 2 sweatshirt colors. One will be Black, the other will be either white, ash, or spartan green.

http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo165/spartan12103/alternateskylinetennislogo.jpg

samej07
07-31-2010, 08:05 PM
Wt_??? You did that in Paint?? Big props man, thats impressive. Looks good man, I'd definitely wear it.

dave333
07-31-2010, 10:41 PM
that is totally sick

Larrysümmers
08-01-2010, 12:53 AM
as peter griffen would say
"friggen sweet"

SystemicAnomaly
08-01-2010, 03:41 AM
Are you taking orders? I could use a Large.

120mphBodyServe
08-01-2010, 04:44 AM
I love it...
BUT... It needs some BLOOD!!!!
And GORE!!! Decapitated heads!!! Exploding chunks of flesh!!!
LIGHTNING!!! BALLS OF FIRE!!!! NINJA STARS!!!
Oh and maybe a vampire.

hollywood9826
08-01-2010, 04:51 AM
very nice man especially in Paint. Would look good in gray with green logo.

Bartelby
08-01-2010, 06:16 AM
Doesn't seem a good idea to have the sword merge with the shield, so push the elbow back to draw the sword away from the shield and/or push the shield further forward.


I made this in Paint, of all things lol. We get a choice of 2 sweatshirt colors. One will be Black, the other will be either white, ash, or spartan green.

http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo165/spartan12103/alternateskylinetennislogo.jpg

rodrigoamaral
08-01-2010, 06:52 AM
OP: Looks very good.. good work!

rommil
08-01-2010, 07:15 AM
I made this in Paint, of all things lol. We get a choice of 2 sweatshirt colors. One will be Black, the other will be either white, ash, or spartan green.

http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo165/spartan12103/alternateskylinetennislogo.jpg

Impressive. The shield looks like a tennis ball so maybe you could change the sword into a tennis racket, a meaner, edgier version of a tennis racket. Just an idea.

Ash_Smith
08-01-2010, 08:25 AM
Really good work (esp as others have said re using Paint!). Tiny suggestion - the spacing on the 2010 is out of balance, would look more balanced and be easier to read with less space beween the characters.

Also, I like the overlap between sword and shield - however, I might make the black outline whch distinguishes between the two a little thicker to increase the contrast.

Ash