Feedback please on the sweatshirt design I made for my school please!

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  1. TennisNinja

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    I put this together in Paint, of all things lol. We get a choice of 2 sweatshirt colors. One will be Black, the other will be either white, ash, or spartan green.

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  2. samej07

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    Wt_??? You did that in Paint?? Big props man, thats impressive. Looks good man, I'd definitely wear it.
     
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  3. dave333

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    that is totally sick
     
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    as peter griffen would say
    "friggen sweet"
     
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  5. SystemicAnomaly

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    Are you taking orders? I could use a Large.
     
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  6. 120mphBodyServe

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    I love it...
    BUT... It needs some BLOOD!!!!
    And GORE!!! Decapitated heads!!! Exploding chunks of flesh!!!
    LIGHTNING!!! BALLS OF FIRE!!!! NINJA STARS!!!
    Oh and maybe a vampire.
     
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  7. hollywood9826

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    very nice man especially in Paint. Would look good in gray with green logo.
     
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  8. Bartelby

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    Doesn't seem a good idea to have the sword merge with the shield, so push the elbow back to draw the sword away from the shield and/or push the shield further forward.


     
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  9. rodrigoamaral

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    OP: Looks very good.. good work!
     
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  10. rommil

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    Impressive. The shield looks like a tennis ball so maybe you could change the sword into a tennis racket, a meaner, edgier version of a tennis racket. Just an idea.
     
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  11. Ash_Smith

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    Really good work (esp as others have said re using Paint!). Tiny suggestion - the spacing on the 2010 is out of balance, would look more balanced and be easier to read with less space beween the characters.

    Also, I like the overlap between sword and shield - however, I might make the black outline whch distinguishes between the two a little thicker to increase the contrast.

    Ash
     
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