yes what you said is good.
hmm... let's see... hard to explain...
You have a semi western grip right?
You seem to be incorporating Fed's takeback style now. Which is fine.
Let me ask you this first... when you do a shadow swing or real swing with that form while holding a real tennis racquet does the racquet move like it does here? I'm asking because I don't want to comment too much if that stick is not behaving like a real racquet would.
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