Thanks for the feedback, crash! I think I've left out the whole pat the dog step, which is resulting in my flat, slappy forehand. If you watch the video on this page, though, I think it still manages to be an effective, reliable forehand--as ugly as it is. But it's unanimous that I need to improve it, and I agree with the consensus, so ill keep working at it.
Head IG Youtek Prestige Mid - Prince Natural Gut 16 mains at 56 lbs, ALU Rough crosses at 53 lbs