good feedback. He does stand too close to the net. That shows his inexperience. needs to compact that stroke. Its not the amount of pace that needs to be generated, but the angle and placement that matters. Perfect example is John McEnroe.
GWB: Get yourself some Mac DVD's and watch him. Slow down his mechanics and that will at least inspire you to shorten those swings. While I still think you have been playing a few years, yoiu still have talent. Someone mentioned a Div 1...that would be inaccurate. Div 1 players have way more power, better footspeed and match toughness. Div 1 players have quite a bit of match play experience so part of the reason they play well in a match. While your strokes are good for practice, you still need work on your feet (that at least shows your in-experience, but foot work also seperates the good from the very good players).
You may not want to hear this, but you seem like a very confrontational person. Or you are very nieve and stupid. You can't post video of your level and expect people to believe you have been playing "serious" tennis since May 2007. If you don't like to stir things up, then you are very nieve and your immaturity shows when people are not with you. You are toio young to understand the real world and Bungalo Bill forgets you are a kid. I don't know if you are lying or telling the truth, but based on your movement, handling of the racquet, your overall "comfort" level on all types of shots (the term comfort was used because you still need alot of work for Div 2-3 tennis. You started way too late for the typical Div 1 level player and if you played one today, you would get ripped 6-0, 6-0. While a Div 3 player you could win a few games each set. Your comfort level leads me to believe you have been playing much longer, but neither you nor I could prove anything on the internet).
Keep working, you are still a nice player.