nickynu
Semi-Pro
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Hi there the above article I wrote about Anne Keothavong the rising British number 1 ladies tennis player, was published to www.Sportingo.com today.
It would be great if anybody wanted to give me feedback - (Constructive please) on the writing style, obviously peoples opinions will differ on the actual content, but I would really appreciate any helpful tips/suggestions people can offer, particularly those with some writing background and credentials. Many thanks in advance.
The title and subheading I chose have been changed by the editors so these would not be my choice and therefore no need to comment on these though, thanks. If people are interested I can share some more work
Hi there the above article I wrote about Anne Keothavong the rising British number 1 ladies tennis player, was published to www.Sportingo.com today.
It would be great if anybody wanted to give me feedback - (Constructive please) on the writing style, obviously peoples opinions will differ on the actual content, but I would really appreciate any helpful tips/suggestions people can offer, particularly those with some writing background and credentials. Many thanks in advance.
The title and subheading I chose have been changed by the editors so these would not be my choice and therefore no need to comment on these though, thanks. If people are interested I can share some more work