Thanks again for all the help. I understand the majority of the points raised. Communicating it to an eight year old is another thing entirely I'm learning. I'll keep it simple and do what I did with her forehand. Proper grip. Stay totally relaxed. See your shot. Hit as fast as you can. She's absolutely crushing the ball at about a 50% in rate. Maybe this just all sorts itself out.
And keep looking for a serve guru in Pittsburgh.
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