Again, nice motion. I'm impressed that you were able to move your toss as far as you did without losing continuity and flow. You obviously have a very, very solid background. The track and arc of the tossed ball are very advanced (Sampras-esque) and already seem repeatable from this small sample. Nice job.
I don't see anything in the motion, per se, as the culprit responsible for your shoulder pain. Overuse as in too much too soon, or old damage rearing its ugly head in combination with an older chassis now seem more likely. Perhaps, and only perhaps, you may be a tad early on contact and may be "popping" to absolute extension at contact instead of flowing through it. A slight lowering of contact point either by lowering the toss a hair or by delaying your attack on the ball a tick could remedy that. In any event don't be too long to see a sports Ortho if pain persists.
As stated the motion is very good. Being hyper-critical, however, what I do see in these new vids is that while the weight transfer from back to front is sound, with a good bow of the front side/front hip stretch, your shoulders are sliding forward at a very constant speed, sliding
with the hips. Compare this photo of another "slide to pin-point, front foot landing" server in the load phase with the frame at 00:13 in the first video you provided in this thread (I couldn't figure out how to create that still from your video).
Note that in Krajicek's load phase his toss shoulder is significantly "behind" his toss side hip. His hips have slid and his front side hip is well forward of the baseline as his shoulders delay and remain well behind the baseline. This creates a more pronounced stretch and bowing of the front (left) side and a greater distance to travel from load into contact which equals higher racquet speed at contact. Side benifits are that this position allows more time/space for the shoulders to rotate near vertical in the load phase, toss shoulder over hitting shoulder as viewed from this angle. Achieving near vertical on this axis in addition to the one corrected with the toss placement further promotes a more vertical cartwheeling of the shoulders hitting shoulder over toss shoulder. It can also allow some added time to allow the toss to fall that hair I alluded to earlier.
Compare Krajicek's position to your's at 00:13 in the video. You'll see that your toss side shoulder has already caught up with and/or passed the front side hip into the court at about the same point. You've spent some of that potential "snap" of the front side before transitioning toward contact, which may be putting more stress on the hitting shoulder as it is forced to make up for the energy loss.
What you may want to consider is slowing down that shoulder slide, delay it, save it to store the energy in that front side during the load phase so it can released in more of a body snap into contact. Whether you employ a "left hip lead" or "upper body hold back" swing thought your toss shoulder should "trail" the front hip in the load phase.
Some of this has to do with your flexibility limits, but as many of us those can probably be increased with a little weight loss and some stretching regimen concentrating on the core.
Good luck
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